REVEALING SUBTEXT

A great script operates on multiple levels and the "story beneath the story" is as least as real and powerful as the surface story. For many readers and producers, a script without depth gets a potentially career-ending "pass."

WHAT IS SUBTEXT?

Subtext shows up in internal conflicts, plots, misplaced emotions and schemes. But subtext goes much further in a great script. Instead of being petty, the subtext of a story can be the most important part of the story. The audience perceives the deeper levels of the story and that becomes their internal journey, the journey they came to the movie theater for.

Subtext can be shown through plot, character, relationships, scene design, symbols, action, and dialogue. It tells the "unspoken story" of a script or the "story beneath the story." Many times, it is what has us feel that a story is real.

THE PROBLEM?

When a script is void of subtext, it has no depth. It comes off as superficial. Lack of depth is one of the top complaints that Hollywood production companies make about scripts sent to them. But there is a solution.

"This program gave me a concrete and substantial method for incorporating subtext that I can know for sure is subtext, and not have to guess when I'm being on-the-nose or not."

- Jason Rodriguez

THERE IS A SOLUTION.

  • Multiple layers of reality in your script?
  • Characters that have depth ?
  • A multi-layered plot that deeply engages the reader?
  • Dialogue that delivers deeper meaning and sometimes multiple levels of meaning?
  • To be able to discover and write subtext at will, instead of having subtext show up haphazardly in your script?

Revealing Subtext is designed to give you a complete understanding of subtext and how to apply it to your own script. It's not a theory class. It's a "write scripts with satisfying subtext from now on" class. And it is guaranteed.

"I saw immediate change in my writing technique...Applying your subtext approach instantly revealed how quickly my writing could grow. It's been an amazing journey up those Ten Subtext Assignments Steps!"

-Suzye Marino

As you read through the days of the program, imagine what your writing would be like if you were proficient at each of these essential subtext skills.

STRUCTURE OF EACH PROGRAM

For ten days, we'll focus on subtext. Each day, you'll receive a lesson via email, along with an assignment for that day. The lessons give concise explanations of an important component of the subtext puzzle along with examples from popular movies. The assignments give you a chance to put your new understanding into practice, transferring the techniques from information to experience.

REVEALING SUBTEXT - Structures for Deeper Meaning
May 10 -20, 2010

$90.00
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In this program, you'll be introduced to a series of structures that naturally cause subtext to occur in your writing.

  • Day One: Understanding subtext and its revelationDay Two: Designing Plots for Subtext Day Three: Designing Characters for Subtext
    Day Four: Designing Scenes for Subtext
    Day Five: Designing Relationships for Subtext
    Day Six: Symbols as Subtext
    Day Seven: The Cover-Up
    Day Eight: Language Patterns of Subtext
    Day Nine: Multiple Meanings
  • Day Ten: Applying Subtext to Your Script

For an excellent example of subtext, see the analysis of the first three pages of AS GOOD AS IT GETS

"The difference in my writing has been phenomenal. I've been learning to be a writer for as long as I can remember. Thanks to this series of courses, I'm finally realizing the level I believed I was capable of, but couldn't quite achieve before.
I would recommend any of Hal's classes to any writer who's serious about their craft."

-Judy Mills

100% Guarantee

We're so confident that you'll love this program that we make this guarantee. If after the first three days, you don't feel like this program is worth it, we will refund your money in full.

To receive a refund, you must pay for the program in advance. If you feel the course does not meet your expectations, email us at the end of the third day and your money will be refunded through PayPal.

"How I wish I'd found your course seven years ago when I wrote my first screenplay."

-Suzye Marino

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